A brief NaNoWriMo note

[chipotle]

So, yes, I’m doing NaNoWriMo this year.

aynjel wrote an eloquent anti-NaNoWriMo rant last year and I’ve come across a couple others, and it’s certainly reasonable to ask why somebody who’s actually gotten a few credits out there and has, at some points, entertained thoughts of being a professional writer would bother trying something that is, on the surface, so blindingly silly. You’re guaranteed to write crap! It’s a terrible way to produce things! These people (participants and especially organizers) don’t take writing seriously!

Here’s a few counterpoints to chew on, both general and personal.

Anyone who seriously wants to be a professional writer will make time to write every day. If they’re starting out when they have a full-time job, they’ll make that time around that job. They’ll carve out, more than likely, two or three hours each day. And the chances are excellent they’re going to write one or two thousand words a day because in the grand scheme of things that is not a lot of writing. The awful truth is that the NaNoWriMo quota isn’t nuts. Most of us think that it is. Most of us will never be professional writers.

“But wait—if professional writers are putting out that many words, why aren’t they all as prolific as Isaac Asimov was?” Because they rewrite. Multiple times. The chances are high that a NaNoWriMo-produced draft will be crap. But there’s nothing about that writing method that guarantees it’s going to be any crappier than any other rough draft. The question isn’t whether you’re going to end up with crap at the end of November; the question is whether you’ll end up with salvageable crap.

What NaNoWriMo does force a lot of people to do, including myself, is to stop rewriting during the rough draft. And for some of us this can be a real issue. I think my stuff tends to be pretty polished, but I also tend to start going back to the beginning of the work almost from the second day, tweaking things. And I may be going out on a limb here, but this is probably why it’s rare for me to get a story longer than about 15,000 words written, and I’ve never broken 35,000 with a completed manuscript.

There’s a certain value in NaNoWriMo for people who have no intention of developing a professional attitude toward writing anyway. It demands a certain discipline which is useful anywhere. If you participate in the regional groups, you may actually turn it into a social event, too, which is kind of neat. (I’ll probably be attending a few “write-ins” myself.) And it may be an interesting challenge for a lot of people who haven’t really tried to write at all anyway, to give them a taste of what really goes into it.

But that discipline is the biggest single skill anyone needs if they really do want to become a professional writer: the skill to be able to sit down and say, “I will make my quota today, even if I don’t feel remotely inspired and the prose is so dull that just typing it is putting me to sleep.” Those who already do have this skill, like haikujaguar, don’t need to be in NaNoWriMo because they’ve already put themselves through the equivalent multiple times. For me, though, it’s a skill that I’ve never fully developed. More worryingly (to me), I’ve been getting worse over the last few years. I want to start getting better at it again.

Lastly, and most personally, it’s an excuse to be experimental. I’m not writing completely without notes (and I expect to develop more notes as time goes on), but by my standards, this is pretty seat-of-the-pants. It’s not genre fiction, but rather slice of life, much more consciously “write what you know” than I’m used to doing. It’s simultaneously uncomfortable and exhilarating. My word count is lagging behind that of several friends I know who are participating, but that’s okay. (I hope.) Currently, that’s 5200 words.

I may talk more about the project later, I may not; it depends on how things develop. If you’re interested, my NaNoWriMo username is (appropriately) wattsm.

Comments

[prickvixen.livejournal.com]

I'm still trying to fathom an anti-NaNoWriMo rant. "Hey, don't be creative!"

There's nothing that I do every day... I wonder if that means I don't want to be anything.

(I won't feel bad if I don't get any writing done in the next couple of weeks, because I wrote for the previous two months. Now I'm working on clothing design.)

[prickvixen.livejournal.com]

(more stuff I'm thinking about)

2000 words a day isn't crazy; sometimes I can get two thousand, but I set my daily quota to one thousand, and anything after that is a gift. I haven't been going back to edit, but I've been real fussy about how I word my first draft... if I wasn't doing that I'd probably be going faster. This is a dumb habit because I'm much stronger in the edit than the first draft... but, you know, I'm obsessed with kicking all kinds of ass, so I think about it a little too hard. One day I might have to fight for 500 words; another I'll manage to pull out five and a half thousand. Dialogue comes real easy for me; I used to rock on description but now I struggle a little with it, which is probably just as well since I once went overboard on extraneous detail. Nobody wants to know what kind of drinking glass my character is using. :)

But yeah, God, don't edit it as you're writing. That's almost as counterproductive as outlining it all... then unconsciously you think you're done because you've got the outline and you've figured out all the good bits and there's nothing but filler to do... yay, fun! If you want to make a statement with the piece, keep it broad so there's some surprise in it to keep you interested. Another problem with an outline is that you might cut off more interesting avenues in the process of conforming to it.

Many professional writers do have Asimov-level output, but that doesn't mean they publish everything they write. Sometimes a story ends up going nowhere, or it doesn't turn out to be as compelling as it seemed when it started, or it inspires something more interesting which then obviates the need for the original piece. Or it's done solely as an exercise (and sometimes it goes the other way and these exercises turn into finished works). Everything a professional writer publishes is not everything they've written. :) And Asimov didn't seem to be too picky about what he published, either, if what I've read of him is any indication.

[haikujaguar.livejournal.com]

You will do better than I've already done, I'm sure. :)

[kereminde.livejournal.com]

Don't wonder too much about it myself . . . I *know* I lack the focus to actualy get it done. I had a crystal-clear idea about two weeks ago, but now it's just gone in smoke. I have OTHER ideas, sure enough, but I can't technically use them for NaNoWriMo.

They're rehashes or continuations of drafts I stuffed into folders and forgot about.

Though if the mind keeps working and chewing on these ideas I might just say "screw it, must appease the Muse!" and get to work anyway. So it won't be "official" . . . the Gods know nothing I do is ever going to be given enough attention to create a scandal for me not following "official protocol".

I just keep hearing my novella teacher, who was a fountain of really useless advice most times, but said one thing in particular which made sense (echoed by a couple writers): "The key to being a writer is to WRITE. By NOT writing, you're not doing what you need to be doing. Write even if it's 100% pure and undiluted crap; you can always go back and fix it after you're done. But you need to finish first; more writers get caught up in endlessly revising chapter one than you could guess."

[padfootsm.livejournal.com]

I've wanted to do this for awhile. Thanks for reminding me chipotle. I'm 'padfootsm' as usual.

[traveller-blues.livejournal.com]

You're actually one of the more prolific writers I know.

I'd say that the difference between you and a NaNo writer is that you tend more towards the short fiction category, one-shots and story-arc stuff, and the elusive /novel/ is what's holding you back.

Me, I'm going for my third win in a row. Despite the fact I don't write much outside of November like I used to, the NaNo efforts are a study in pacing, time dedication, and how well I plan ahead (or appear to, anyway). Plot hooks get scattered into my early parts like buckshot. Some of them appeal to be resolved early, some late, and a few never got resolved last years.

I'm building the better mousetrap this year -- going to finish the book -regardless- of how long it takes, is my intention. And I'm finding that now that I'm hooked into the habit? I write almost as cleanly as if I were editing, but I'm not letting myself be held back by fear while November rolls.

I want to have an almost-completed novel by the time November 30 rolls around, with solid characters that will carry the story through to the end, and make December 1 not such a wall of ennui anymore.

Honestly? When I saw that you were doing the Nano this year, I thought, 'Cool!'

I've always loved your work.
-Traveller